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jmoose
06-20-2011, 09:42 PM
Hey everyone! This is an original song called "I'm leaving" by me, Joseph Anthony. I just started and just want some criticism. Anything that you would like to see me change would be greatly appreciated! Thanks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EDY5y3OD380

spencerandhallie
06-21-2011, 12:59 AM
I enjoyed it! Very nice voice and very new and unique. We will be subbing! I can't give much criticism for it, though which means...good job!


Spencer: SandH

zdaddy
06-21-2011, 02:33 AM
I liked it. You have a good voice and some definite talent. The only thing I would suggest is getting someone to film you with a camera on a tripod... or hold the camera steadier.. :) Other than that great job!
I subbed your channel.. or whosever (is that a word?) channel that was posted on.
Let us know when you put another one up!

Z

PenguinNerd
06-21-2011, 11:12 PM
Zdaddy really said it all. I liked it a lot you have a good voice! Let us know when you post more. :D

mrofficial1982
07-08-2011, 03:41 PM
As I stated on your youtube page "Cool song, man", I agree with zdaddy too.